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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Today I was in the shopping center with my neighbor, who was there to collect several item for a friend. One of the friend’s parents were struck by a serious disease. While staying there, I became aware a young mom with her daughter. She was paying the attention to her as they shopped. I stopped her to offer my appreciation to him for the fact which she was so devoted to her little girl. I went on to say that I feel sad to see moms texting or talking on their cell phones and completely ignore their children. I praised her and told the little girl that she had the good mom in the whole world. The mom smiled, obvious feeling happy at my words.

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【解析】本文主要講了作者去逛街時，看到了一位年輕的媽媽很認真的看護自己的女兒，作者表揚了她，并且告訴這個小女孩，她有全世界最好的媽媽。

考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。被several修飾，所以用復(fù)數(shù)形式，item改成 items。

考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。One of + 可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù) + 謂語動詞單數(shù)，是固定結(jié)構(gòu)，所以were改成was。

考查固定短語。我注意到一個年輕的媽媽和她的女兒。become aware of知道、發(fā)覺,是固定短語，所以aware后面加of。

考查固定短語。pay attention to注意，是固定用法，所以刪除the。

考查代詞。我停下來表示我對她的欣賞�！澳贻p的媽媽”是女的，所以him改成her。

考查同位語從句。that she was so devoted to her little girl. 是一個同位語從句，引導(dǎo)詞在從句中不作任何成分，也沒有什么實際意義，所以which改成that。

考查賓語從句的時態(tài)。that I felt sad to see moms texting or talking on their cell phones and completely ignore their children. 是一個賓語從句，主句用的一般過去時，從句要使用相應(yīng)的過去的時態(tài)，所以feel改成felt。

考查固定用法。and連接并列結(jié)構(gòu)，see sb. doing看到某人正在做某事，是固定用法，所以ignore改成 ignoring。

考查最高級。我表揚了她，并且告訴這個小女孩，她有全世界最好的媽媽。這里需要使用最高級，所以good改成best。

考查副詞。修飾動詞feeling，用副詞，所以obvious 改成obviously。