Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

It was a rainy November morning. Overcome with anger I knew if I didn’t leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him.

He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table. “Don’t you have enough to do？I can take care of myself.” I stormed out, not even kissing him good-bye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut.

Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when heart a attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.

The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted was hot homecooked meal and a good night’s sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue: He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret.

Ten minutes later, ignoring Joe’s warning I turned off the main route. I thought it hadn’t rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn’t risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1:

Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.

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Paragraph 2:

I screamed that I couldn’t make it.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. It was Joe！I couldn’t help bursting into tears. Joe shouted to me not to be frightened. Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. I opened the door, grabbed it and inched out. However, a sudden fall left me in the rushing water. I struggled to my feet, only to find a branch blocking the way right in front of me.

Paragraph 2:

I screamed that I couldn’t make it. Joe, however, remained calm！He urged me to take one step at a time and assured me I could make it. I moved forward slowly and cautiously before I fell into his arms. Sobbing against his chest, I apologized that I shouldn’t have taken the shortcut. Joe patted me saying his primary concern was my safety. Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，文章主要記敘了十一月的一個早晨，下著大雨，作者的丈夫Joe叮囑作者不要抄近路去上班。也使作者想起了丈夫因?yàn)樾呐K病發(fā)作，不得不待在家里做家務(wù)，而作者要繼續(xù)全職工作。一天的勞累之后，作者想要的只是一頓熱騰騰的家宴和一夜好眠，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)丈夫晚上只有燕麥粥，而且家務(wù)也做的不好的事情，作者對丈夫心生不滿。作者沒有聽丈夫的話，還是走了近路，結(jié)果車被困在了積滿雨水的道路上。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：我回過頭，盯著一輛卡車閃爍的燈光。所以后文應(yīng)該是講述作者發(fā)現(xiàn)是丈夫來解救自己，以及丈夫解救作者的經(jīng)過，最后作者被一根樹枝攔住了；第二段開頭是：我尖叫著說我過去不了。本段應(yīng)該寫作者的丈夫如何鼓勵作者克服了困難的，最后作者意識到丈夫其實(shí)懂得如何照顧自己，盡管他做家務(wù)很麻煩。

續(xù)寫時要求使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。