Question

假定你是李華， 你們學校最近開展了創(chuàng)建“平安校園”的活動。你們班為此組織主題班會，請你就如何創(chuàng)建“平安校園”在班會上談談你的想法。發(fā)言應包括下面的內容：

1.安全意識的重要性；

2.校內潛在的一些人身安全隱患，如: 體育運動時，和同學發(fā)生矛盾時等情況。

3.你對解決這些問題的積極建議。

注意：

1．詞數100左右；

2．文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

注釋： 校園安全： safety at school

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Answer 1

Dear classmates,

Whether our school campus is a safe place to stay on means a lot to both teachers and students. And the campaign “safety at school” launched recently will make us aware that safety should always come first whatever we do.

Accidents can happen easily at school. When doing sports, we might get injured. When decorating our classroom standing on the desk, we might fall to the ground and get hurt. When having disagreement with our classmates, we might quarrel and cause fighting.

So, I think, to follow our PE teachers’ advice can avoid unnecessary injures in PE class. And it will be helpful to have some students around when we have to do things on high places. Besides, quarrelling or even fighting is not a wise choice to solve the disagreement with our classmates since it may bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.

Thanks.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假定你是李華， 你們學校最近開展了創(chuàng)建“平安校園”的活動。你們班為此組織主題班會，請你就如何創(chuàng)建“平安校園”在班會上談談你的想法。發(fā)言應包括下面的內容：1.安全意識的重要性；2.校內潛在的一些人身安全隱患，如: 體育運動時，和同學發(fā)生矛盾時等情況。3.你對解決這些問題的積極建議。需要寫的內容已經粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點說明】Whether our school campus is a safe place to stay on means a lot to both teachers and students.這里含有一個主語從句；And the campaign “safety at school” launched recently will make us aware that safety should always come first whatever we do.這里含有一個賓語從句。

考點：話題類書面表達