Question

假如你是校報(bào)負(fù)責(zé)人，急需在學(xué)校內(nèi)聘一位同學(xué)任英文版的編輯。請你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”為題目寫一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 該工作主要包括兩部分：一是從英文報(bào)刊雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇適合學(xué)生的文章；二是選擇與編輯同學(xué)們的來稿。
2. 希望該同學(xué)滿足下列要求：
a. 樂意奉獻(xiàn)出一些業(yè)余時(shí)間為同學(xué)們服務(wù);
b. 英文與美術(shù)皆好；能熟練使用電腦；
c. 感興趣的同學(xué)請?jiān)诒局軆?nèi)與學(xué)生會(huì)（Students’ Union）聯(lián)系。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 不要逐字翻譯， 要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。
An English Editor Wanted
Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition.
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Students’ Union

Answer 1

One possible verson:
Ａn English Editor Wanted
Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition .The job mainly Includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers , magazines or the Internet for us students .The other is to pick out articles from students in our school and deit them for use.
We hope that he /she could meet the following requirements.First , he /she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others .Second , it is necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine art .Needless to say that the ability to use the coputer is important as well.
Those who are interested in the job ,please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week .
Students’ Union

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一則啟示，招聘校報(bào)英文版編輯。為了使文章段落清晰，在篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面應(yīng)分兩段來分別介紹工作內(nèi)容和對應(yīng)聘學(xué)生的要求；在陳述各要點(diǎn)時(shí)要恰當(dāng)使用連接詞以使內(nèi)容連貫，上下文銜接自然，而且語言應(yīng)注意簡潔；此外在時(shí)態(tài)方面，應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章語言簡練，通俗易懂。文中多使用簡單句，使文章顯得簡潔明了，符合啟示、通知類文體對語言的要求。文中one。。。，the other；first、 second等表順序的連接詞也使文章層次分明，條理清楚，顯示了作者思路的清晰。高級詞匯Needless to say和經(jīng)典定語從句Those who are interested in the job的出現(xiàn)給樸素的語言增添了一抹亮麗的色彩。