Question

【題目】假設你叫李華，你的英國筆友Jack不久前去美國留學，他給你寫信說很不適應那里的生活。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語給他寫封回信，鼓勵他勇敢面對。

1.了解當?shù)厣�活習慣，尊重當?shù)仫L俗；

2.與美國學生多交流；

3.多參加戶外活動；

4.注意與人交流的禮儀。

注意：

1.內(nèi)容應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發(fā)揮。

2.詞數(shù)：100左右。信的開頭和結尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.參考詞匯：課外活動：activities after class

Dear Jack,

I'm really glad to hear from you and know how you are getting along.________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m really glad to hear from you and know you are getting along.I think it is common for you not to get used to the life there.Here I have some suggestions for you.First of all,you should respect local customs and involve yourself in the native’s lives.Just as a saying goes,“when in Rome,do as the Romans do”.Secondly,don’t forget to communicate with American students and make friends with them.Friendship will bring you happiness.What’s more, it is better for you to take more outdoor activities with your friends,which may help you relax and have fun.Finally, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.

I hope you can adapt to your new life soon and enjoy your stay there.

Keep in touch.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信件；你的英國筆友Jack不久前去美國留學，他給你寫信說很不適應那里的生活，你根據(jù)以下提示用英語給他寫封回信，鼓勵他勇敢面對：了解當?shù)厣�活習慣，尊重當?shù)仫L俗；與美國學生多交流；多參加戶外活動；注意與人交流的禮儀。時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：get used to （適應），suggestion（建議），respect local customs（尊重當?shù)仫L俗），involve yourself in（參與），communicate with（與……交流），make friends with（交朋友），take more outdoor activities（多參加戶外活動），mind your own manners（注意自己的禮儀）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如定語從句What’s more, it is better for you to take more outdoor activities with your friends,which may help you relax and have fun.；狀語從句及省略Finally, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。文中First of all，Secondly，What’s more，F(xiàn)inally使得文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。