Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（30分）
據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國(guó)女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌（lung cancer）后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國(guó)抗癌協(xié)會(huì)（ACS）決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問(wèn)信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。
假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：
l  自我介紹
l  得知的情況
l  表示鼓勵(lì)
l  打算為她做什么
l  祝她早日康復(fù)
注意：
1. 信的格式已為你寫(xiě)好
2. 信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況。
3. 詞數(shù)100左右。
4. 請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。
Dear Amy,
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Amy,
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.
At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.
I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.
May you recover soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。要求用英文給Amy寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，信件要點(diǎn)包括：自我介紹，得知的情況，表示鼓勵(lì)，打算為她做什么，祝她早日康復(fù)，審題時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is.使用了no matter how引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，還有I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you.用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：書(shū)信類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。