Question

生活中常有意外事故發(fā)生。假設(shè)你和你班同學(xué)李華從鍋爐房打完開水，在回寢室的路上，李華的熱水瓶突然破裂，開水燙傷了李華的腳。你對此進(jìn)行了必要的急救。請你結(jié)合此事，用英語寫一篇100—120詞的短文，向?qū)W校英文報Energetic Teens投稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1. 事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過；
2. 你是如何實施急救的(冷水沖洗、送醫(yī)院做進(jìn)一步處理等)；
3. 簡要談?wù)勀銓φ莆找欢�急救知識重要性的認(rèn)識。
參考詞匯：鍋爐房boiler house 熱水瓶thermos bottle
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Answer 1

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Accidents happen. That day, Li Hua and I were on our way back after fetching some hot water when suddenly a sound of explosion scared me. Li Hua's thermos bottle burst and the spilt boiling water caused severe injuries to his feet. The burn was so severe that the skin was red and swollen. I could tell Li Hua was in extreme pain. I managed to stay calm, crazily searching for what I had learnt from my first-aid class. Immediately, I carried him to the water tap nearby and put his feet under the cold running water until the pain lessened. Afterwards, I called a taxi and rushed him to the hospital where he received further treatment. I was finally relieved. Only then was I aware what a difference a basic knowledge of first aid can make, especially in such a case.

本文敘述自己經(jīng)歷的一件事情，給出的要點(diǎn)很充分，所以跟翻譯句子差不多。但千萬不能只是翻譯，需要用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連接句子。敘述事情的經(jīng)過時，不要太羅嗦，寫出重要情節(jié)即可。最后一定表達(dá)急救知識的重要性。