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16．在生活中有人喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，也有人不太喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，你校就"學(xué)校應(yīng)不應(yīng)該召開(kāi)運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)"進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的短文，并簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表你自己的觀點(diǎn)．以下是調(diào)查結(jié)果：

80%支持	1、增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)； 2、培養(yǎng)合作精神； 3、學(xué)會(huì)如何面對(duì)勝負(fù)；
20%反對(duì)	1、并非是強(qiáng)身健體的唯一形式； 2、容易造成傷害； 3、影響學(xué)習(xí)．
你的看法	（至少兩點(diǎn)理由）…

注意：1．根據(jù)要點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；
        2．字?jǐn)?shù)120左右．文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
        3．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．
Some people like sport while others not in our life．Recently，our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not，students'opinions are divided on the topic．
                                                               

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是"Is sport really good for us？"，給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，還要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處；然后指出過(guò)度運(yùn)動(dòng)的壞處；最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化．難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的．在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文屬于正反方觀點(diǎn)作文，但是要點(diǎn)給出的不算多，需要考生自己添加部分．在分析部分已經(jīng)詳細(xì)說(shuō)明了．在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，如First of all，In addition，Plus，What's worse，Besides，F(xiàn)or one thing，F(xiàn)or another，使他們成為整體．要選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，讓文章有變化，有層次，如 does them good，cooperate with，deal with，push themselves hard，hold the opposite view，As far as I'm concerned．在對(duì)于諸如此類文章的寫(xiě)作，要善于使用不同的句型，如thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies．是非謂語(yǔ)形式，it's a good choice to hold a sports meeting．it's a good way of relaxing ourselves，運(yùn)用了形式主語(yǔ)．英語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換．
First of all，sport helps them build up their strength，keeping them healthy．（高分句型一）
Plus，students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting，thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies．（高分句型二）
 However，20%of them hold the opposite view，arguing that sport is not the only way to keep healthy．（高分句型三）
Besides，taking part in the sports meeting，they think，will have a negative effect on their studies．（高分句型四）

解答 Some people like sport while others not in our life．Recently，our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not．Students'opinions are divided on the topic．
      80% of the students think sport does them good．First of all，sport helps them build up their strength，keeping them healthy．（高分句型一） In addition，it helps develop students'ability to cooperate with each other．Plus，students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting，thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies．（高分句型二）
      However，20% of them hold the opposite view，arguing that sport is not the only way to keep healthy．（高分句型三）What's worse，some of them might get injured in the sports meeting．Besides，taking part in the sports meeting，they think，will have a negative effect on their studies．（高分句型四）
      As far as I'm concerned，it's a good choice to hold a sports meeting．For one thing，we can develop team spirit by participating in sports and games．For another，it's a good way of relaxing ourselves，making our school life colorful．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．