Question

最近幾年越來越多的家長(zhǎng)放棄自己的工作到孩子學(xué)校附近租房照顧小孩讀書。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下

表，就這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文。

現(xiàn)象	根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，約8%家長(zhǎng)放棄自己的工作到孩子學(xué)校附近租房照顧小孩讀書。
利	1. 小孩在放學(xué)后能吃上一頓好飯；沒有很多干擾，休息好，身體健康，學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)好。 2. 小孩可以經(jīng)常與父母溝通，感受到家庭的溫暖和愛，減少心理壓力。
弊	1. 小孩依賴性強(qiáng)，少與同學(xué)們交流與相處，交際技巧得不到充分培養(yǎng)。 2. 父母由于全心照顧小孩，沒有足夠的時(shí)間照顧家庭，家庭問題有可能出現(xiàn)。

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　 According to a recent survey, about 8% of the parents give up their job and rent a house near their

children’s school to take care of them. ____________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

On the one hand, parents can provide their children with a good living environment and a good meal after they come back from school. Without much disturbance, the children can have a good sleep and keep good health as well as good scores. What’s more, the children can communicate with their parents a lot and feel the warmth and love of the family, which can help to reduce pressure from study. But on the other hand, with parents taking good care of them, the children will become more dependent and their communication skills cannot be fully developed because they don’t have much time to get along with their classmates. Besides, devoted to their children, parents don’t have enough time for the family, which may result in some family problems.