Question

5．假設(shè)你李華，前幾天你的同學(xué)Jack說了自己的煩惱．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)信件內(nèi)容和建議要點(diǎn)給他寫一封回信．
建議要點(diǎn)：1．調(diào)整心態(tài)，樹立信心；   
                  2．按時(shí)休息，適當(dāng)放松；
                  3．制定合理計(jì)劃．
注    意：1．詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
    2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
Dear Li Hua
I'm writing to ask for your help．
The next examination is coming，but I feel more and more nervous and these days I can't fall asleep as usual．What should I do？
                                                       Yours，
                                                       Jack     
Dear Jack
I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in falling asleep for a long time．
                                                                                                                                                       
                                                            Yours，
                                                                    Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
As long as you are confident，you can do your best in the exams．
只要你有信心，你就能在考試中盡你最大的努力．
高分句型二：
Last but not least，you'd better make a reasonable study plan and stick to it．
最后但并非最不重要的是，你最好制定一個(gè)合理的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃并堅(jiān)持下去．

解答 Dear Jack，
     I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in falling asleep for a long time．
     From your letter I know that it is stress that causes your problem．So I suggest you do as follows．First of all，you must adjust your attitude towards exams and believe in yourself．As long as you are confident，you can do your best in the exams（高分句型一）．Besides，you should have enough sleep every day．Meanwhile，don't forget to take part in some activities to relax．With a healthy body，I'm sure you will study more efficiently．Last but not least，you'd better make a reasonable study plan and stick to it（高分句型二）．In this way，you will have a sense of achievement and then avoid being stressed out all the time．
      I hope the suggestions will be of some help．Good luck!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

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