Question

假如你是李華，你的筆友Mike 從媒體上得知前段時(shí)間全國多地包括寧波等地出現(xiàn)霧霾，非常擔(dān)心，寫E-mail詢問有關(guān)情況，請(qǐng)你回復(fù)�；貜�(fù)應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：
實(shí)況描述       2.影響和成因           3.生活啟示
注意：1.詞數(shù)：100-120詞。 E-mail的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2.生詞：霧霾 haze
Dear Mike,
Thank you very much for your concern. 
…
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mike, 
Thank you very much for your concern. Recently many places in China including Ningbo were blanketed with thick yellow haze. Everything around disappeared from our sight. Some highways were closed. Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets. Many people, especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to breathe. As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs. Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare.
To make a significant change, we really have to do more to protect our environment. To live a better life, we have to push on with the economy, but it would be meaningless if we had to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文是書信類作文，請(qǐng)給你的筆友Mike寫E-mail，告知前段時(shí)間全國多地包括寧波等地出現(xiàn)霧霾的情況。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，但是具體的內(nèi)容要考生自己充實(shí)，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏，更要有豐富的內(nèi)容，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文語言簡(jiǎn)潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：be blanketed with被覆蓋了，As a result因此, contributed to導(dǎo)致at the cost of以…為代價(jià)， Many people, especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to breathe.這句話用了it做形式賓語， local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs. 這句話用了定語從句， To make a significant change, we really have to do more to protect our environment. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語。
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