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18．假如你班李津（男）和王英（女）兩位同學(xué)在高三階段有不同的學(xué)習(xí)方法，請描述下列各圖，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?nbsp;

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Li Jin and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three．They both work hard but they have different learning methods．
LiJin often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher．（高分句型一）As a result，he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework．（高分句型二）So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep．
　　However，Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning．She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class．Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，which makes it possible for her to go to bed early．（高分句型三）
　　In my opinion，Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself，so I prefer her learning method．（高分句型四）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文，根據(jù)提示信息李津（男）和王英（女）兩位同學(xué)在高三階段有不同的學(xué)習(xí)方法，請描述下列各圖，并談?wù)勀愕目捶�，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：李明經(jīng)常上課睡覺，不聽教師講課；王英上課認(rèn)真聽講，仔細(xì)記筆記；而李明經(jīng)常晚上學(xué)到深夜；王英晚上做完作業(yè)，早早上床睡覺，休息得很好；表達(dá)出自己對這一現(xiàn)象的看法． 2、圖畫是文章的總體框架，要在圖畫的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：instead of 而不是；As a result結(jié)果是；stay up late熬夜；However然而；Because of由于；In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來看；
Li Jin often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher．（高分句型一）
As a result，he misses lots of points that the leacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework．（高分句型二）
Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，which makes it possible for her to go to bed early．（高分句型三）
In my opinion，Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself，so I prefer her learning method．（高分句型四）

解答 Li Jin and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three．They both work hard but they have different learning methods．
　　Li Jin often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher．（高分句型一）As a result，he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework．（高分句型二）So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep．
　　However，Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning．She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class．Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，which makes it possible for her to go to bed early．（高分句型三）
　　In my opinion，Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself，so I prefer her learning method．（高分句型四）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．