Question

有人說，“Money can’t buy happiness”；也有人說“Money can talk”，請你用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />注意：詞數(shù)120~150；

Answer 1

Can money buy happiness? Various people have various answers.
Some people think that money is the source of happiness. With money, one can buy whatever he enjoys. With money, one can do whate ver he likes. So, in their minds, money can bring comfort, security, and so on. Money, as they think, is the source of happiness.
But there are still a lot of others who think that money is the root of all evil. Money drives peopl e to steal, to rob, and to break the law. A lot of people became criminals just because they were in sea rch of money. And in the Western countries, there is nothing that can＇t be bought by money. Many pe ople lose their own lives when hunting it.
I think that money is essential to life and we cannot do without money. But even though money is necessary to life, it can＇t buy happiness. Happiness is not something that can be measured by money. It is a state of mind. One can have plenty of money, with which he can buy whatever he wants, and at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of probl ems. Therefore, although money is necessary for a happy life, it can＇t buy happiness.

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】文章句式靈活多變，是文章的亮點：With money, one can buy whatever he enjoys. With money, one can do whate ver he likes. 這句話用了賓語從句， But there are still a lot of others who think that money is the root of all evil. 這句話用了定語從句， A lot of people became criminals just because they were in search of money.這句話用了原因狀語從句， there is nothing that can＇t be bought by money. 這句話用了定語從句，Many pe ople lose their own lives when hunting it.這句話用了狀語從句的省略， But even though money is necessary to life, it can＇t buy happiness. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句， One can have plenty of money, with which he can buy whatever he wants, and at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of probl ems. 這句話用了定語從句，原因狀語從句和賓語從句。