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8．假如你是李華，是高三某班班長(zhǎng)．為了豐富同學(xué)們的課外生活，班級(jí)準(zhǔn)備成立一個(gè)自行車俱樂(lè)部（cycling club）．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一則口頭通知．通知如下：
1．每周訓(xùn)練一次，由體育老師輔導(dǎo)，安排在每周三下午第三節(jié)的課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間；
2．注意事項(xiàng)：自備自行車；活動(dòng)免費(fèi)．
3．到班長(zhǎng)那里報(bào)名．
注意：
 1．詞數(shù)120左右；  
 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
 3．文章開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Attention，please，everyone．Ever since we entered Senior 3，we've burdened ourselves with a lot of work____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 分析要求可知，假如你是高三某班班長(zhǎng)．為了豐富同學(xué)們的課外生活，班級(jí)準(zhǔn)備成立一個(gè)自行車俱樂(lè)部（cycling club）．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一則口頭通知．短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱．盡量多使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)以及固定句式，注意英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣表達(dá)，句子之間的連貫性，增強(qiáng)寫作的規(guī)范性．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中用了一些高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和句式．如：burdened ourselves with，It is desired that，as原因狀語(yǔ)從句，which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，What needs to be specifically noted is that主語(yǔ)從句等都很不錯(cuò)．
 To make ourselves enjoy a colorful life out of our daily study，we've decided to found a cycling club and organize some activities．（高分句型一）
  We plan to offer basic training once a week，which will be instructed by our PE teacher．（高分句型二）
It is desired that you take time to join our club，as it is a great way to keep fit and a good chance to relax ourselves．（高分句型三）
What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge，but you should bring your  bicycle along．（高分句型四）

解答 Attention，please，everyone．Ever since we entered Senior 3，we've burdened ourselves with a lot of work．To make ourselves enjoy a colorful life out of our daily study，we've decided to found a cycling club and organize some activities．（高分句型一）
     We plan to offer basic training once a week，which will be instructed by our PE teacher．（高分句型二）It will fall on the third period in the afternoon，when students are having after-class activities．
     It is desired that you take time to join our club，as it is a great way to keep fit and a good chance to relax ourselves．（高分句型三） What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge，but you should bring your  bicycle along．（高分句型四）
     Those who have interest can go to the monitor and sign up．
     That's all．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．