Question

書面表達

假設你是李華，你班來自美國的交流學生Arthur患病住院已有三周，請你用英文給他寫封信，主要內容包括：

－詢問病情，表示關切

－介紹班級近期活動、學習等情況

－表達祝愿

注意：1．詞數100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．信的格式已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　Dear Arthur,

________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　一、評分原則

　　1．本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。

　　2．評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調整檔次，最后給分。

　　3．詞數少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。

　　4．評分時應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的豐富性和準確性及上下文的連貫性。

　　5．拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。

　　6．如書寫較差以至影響交際，將其分數降低一個檔次。

　　二、內容要點

　　1．詢問病情，表示關切

　　2．介紹班級近期活動、學習等情況

　　3．表達祝愿

　　三、各檔次的給分范圍和要求

　　四、說明：1．內容要點可用不同方式表達。2．應緊扣主題，可適當發(fā)揮。

　　Possible Version 1

Dear Arthur,

　　It's three weeks since you fell ill．I guess you have suffered a lot in the hospital, but are you feeling any better now?We're concerned about your health．And we all miss you very much．

　　In the past three weeks, we've been buried in study because the exam is around the corner．But don't worry about your lessons, with which all of us will help you when you are back．Besides the routine work, we held a football match in our grade and our class won the championship．If only you had been with us!

　　We hope you will soon recover and join us in our colorful school life．

　　Best wishes．

Yours,

Li Hua

　　Possible Version 2

Dear Arthur,

　　It has been three weeks since you went to hospital．How are you feeling now?Hope you will recover soon because all of our classmates miss you very much．

　　As you may know, we have just finished our mid-term exam．I am very happy to say that I made great progress this time．I really appreciate your encouragement．Besides, our school's sports meeting will be held next Friday and Saturday．Our class did really well last year and I believe we would get more prizes this year if you were to join us．

　　We are looking forward to your coming back．

　　Take care of yourself!

Yours,

Li Hua