Question

9．某中學英文報近期開辟專欄，討論課堂紀律的問題，請結合自身的實際，按以下提示，用英文給該專欄寫一篇稿件．
     1、列舉兩種或以上違反課堂紀律的情形；
     2、指出其危害；
     3、提出解決紀律問題的措施（包括老師和學生）
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右；開頭已為你寫出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱．
     Good class discipline ensures that every student learns well in class．However，very often we notice students disobey rules．Occasionally some students eat snacks while listening to the teacher，or when tired，they fall asleep in class．What's worse，some students even talk loudly with others，making it difficult for the students to hear the teacher clearly．
Listening to the teacher attentively in class is the major way we gain knowledge．If we do not focus our attention and take careful notes，we may miss many important points，or worse still，we may not be able to understand at all．A noisy class is just an unacceptable mess．
To solve the problem，I think the teacher should first shoulder the responsibility and be strict with everyone．Also，students are supposed to realize the importance of good discipline．Whoever breaks a rule in class should be punished．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應用文，根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇稿件，結合自身的實際闡述課堂紀律的問題．寫作要點：1．列舉兩種或以上違反課堂紀律的情形；2．指出其危害；3．提出解決紀律問題的措施（包括老師和學生）．屬提綱作文．在寫作時人稱以第一人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．重要短語：fall asleep （睡覺…），listen to the teacher （聽老師上課…），focus one's attention （集中注意力），shoulder the responsibility（承擔責任），be strict with sb（對…嚴格），be supposed to do…（應該做某事）．

解答 Good class discipline ensures that every student learns well in class． However，very often we notice students disobey rules．Occasionally some students eat snacks while listening to the teacher，or when tired，they fall asleep in class．What's worse，some students even talk loudly with others，making it difficult for the students to hear the teacher clearly．【高分句型】（列舉兩種或以上違反課堂紀律的情形）
Listening to the teacher attentively in class is the major way we gain knowledge．【高分句型】If we do not focus our attention and take careful notes，we may miss many important points，or worse still，we may not be able to understand at all．A noisy class is just an unacceptable mess．（指出其危害）
To solve the problem，I think the teacher should first shoulder the responsibility and be strict with everyone．Also，students are supposed to realize the importance of good discipline．Whoever breaks a rule in class should be punished．【高分句型】（提出解決紀律問題的措施）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．