假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處,每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。
I will spend the summer holiday in the country next year. Although the city is modern and convenience, there are still some problem, such as air pollution and noise. In the country, I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life. There, the air was fresh and the water is clean. Trees are green and birds are sung. I can also go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. What’s most, I can climb the hills. All this will be interested and good for your health. Above all, I can go back to the nature. But I want to go to the country a change. I’m looking forward to my summer holiday.


【小題1】convenience→convenient
【小題2】problem→problem
【小題3】was→is
【小題4】sung→singing
【小題5】most→more
【小題6】interested→interesting
【小題7】your→my
【小題8】去掉the
【小題9】But→So
【小題10】加上for

解析試題分析:這是作者以第一人稱撰寫的一篇渴望關于環(huán)保的小作文。
【小題1】Although the city is modern and convenience,這里需要convenient與modern一起作表語。
【小題2】there are still some problem,problem應用復數(shù)形式,因為系動詞為are。
【小題3】the air was fresh and the water is clean.此文的時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,故此處的was應該為is。
【小題4】Trees are green and birds are sung.考查語態(tài)。birds是sing的動作執(zhí)行者,故應用現(xiàn)在分詞。
【小題5】What’s most作為插入語,“更重要的是”,most應該為more。
【小題6】All this will be interested and good for your health. interested應該為interesting,此處說的是“有趣的”。
【小題7】All this will be interested and good for your health.此文是作者用第一人稱敘述的,故需用第一人稱,your改為my
【小題8】I can go back to the nature. nature指“自然”,不與the連用,如:keep the balance of nature保持生態(tài)平衡。
【小題9】But I want to go to the country a change. But改為So,因上下文是因果關系。
【小題10】But I want to go to the country a change. a change前缺少介詞,故加上for。for a change換個環(huán)境,換換口味。
考點:考查短文糾錯

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