Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共

有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

My friend Sally is very outgoing girl in my class. She had many hobbies, such as writing poems, playing the pingpong and painting. Her favorable subject is art. She became interested in it when she was very young. Her dream is to study aboard. But now she is trying to improve her English and learn more about west culture as well. She will never give up once she makes up her mind. She believes in one day she will be able to improving the friendship between China and the rest of the world. I hope my dream will come true.

Answer 1

1.加a

2.had改為has

3.去掉the

4.favorable改為favorite

5.aboard改為abroad

6.But 改為so

7.west改為western

8.去掉in;或者把in改為that

9.improving改為improve

10.my改為her

【解析】

試題分析：短文改錯題

1. friend Sally is very outgoing girl in my class，girl為可數(shù)名詞，需加數(shù)量詞，故加a

2. had many hobbies，整篇文章都是以一般現(xiàn)在時來介紹Sally，本句說的是她平常的愛好，應當用現(xiàn)在時表述，故had改為has

3. the pingpong，此句錯在固定搭配，打乒乓球中間不要定冠詞the，而像彈鋼琴play the piano 則需要，故去掉the

4. favorable subject is art，favorable意為順利的，良好的，有利的；結(jié)合下文可知第三句是說她最喜歡的科目是藝術(shù)，故favorable改為favorite

5. dream is to study aboard，此句的意思是說她的夢想是去國外學習，而aboard作副詞講是“上船，上飛機；在船上”.故aboard改為abroad

6. 改為so；第六句But now she is trying to improve her English，上文是說她很想出國，所以現(xiàn)在正在提高自己的英語，上下文是因果關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故But 改為so

7. more about west culture as well，第六句意為學習更多的西方文化，west是名詞，意為西方，故把west改為它的形容詞形式，意為學習更多的西方文化，故west改為western

8. believes in one day she will，believe后可接（that）賓語從句，而believe in 后不能接從句，故in改為that（that可省略）

9. believes in one day she will be able to improving the friendship，詞組be able to后加動詞原形，故improving改為improve

10. my改為her；最后一句I hope my dream will come true，整篇文章都是在介紹Sally,訴說她的興趣愛好夢想，故是我希望她的夢想成真，故my改為her

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