1.文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在其下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:
1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.
One day King Arthur saw a happy beggar (乞丐) and wondered why the beggar was so happy,because that the king didn't feel happy though she could have whatever he wants.From this we can see that one's happiness doesn't depend whether he is rich nor poor.Happy is just a state of mind.As long as one thinks he's satisfied,he is happy.
There are many different opinion about happiness.To some,happiness is being surround by their family members and friends.To others,happiness means achieving success in something,such as meet a goal.To those who have been injured,happiness can simple mean a day without suffering,or just being alive.

分析 本文通過乞丐與國王的故事告訴我們,每個人有各自不同的幸福,只要一個人自己感到滿足了,那他就是幸福的,幸福只是一種心情.

解答 One day King Arthur saw a happy beggar (乞丐) and wondered why the beggar was so happy,because that the king didn't feel happy though she could have whatever he wants.From this we can see that one's happiness doesn't depend∧whether he is rich nor poor.Happy is just a state of mind.As long as one thinks he's satisfied,he is happy.
There are many different opinion about happiness.To some,happiness is being surroundby their family members and friends.To others,happiness means achieving success in something,such as meet a goal.To those who have been injured,happiness can simple mean a day without suffering,or just being alive.
詳解:
1.去掉 that;考查連詞,Because是連詞,引導原因狀語從句,后面不用that.
2.she 改為he;考查人稱代詞,此處人稱代詞指代the King,故用he.
3.wants 改為wanted;考查動詞的時態(tài),本文用一般過去時來敘述,故用wanted.
4.depend后加 on/upon;考查固定短語,Depend on 是固定搭配,意為"依靠".
5.nor改為or; 考查固定搭配,Whether …or 意為"是…還是".
6.Happy 改為Happiness;考查名詞.此處用名詞形式做句子的主語,意為:幸福只是一種心情.
7.opinion改為opinions;考查名詞的復數(shù),Many 后面加名詞的復數(shù)形式.
8.surround 改為surrounded;考查動詞的語態(tài),此處句意為"幸福就是被家里人和朋友們包圍著",故用過去分詞surrounded構(gòu)成被動語態(tài).
9.meet改為meeting;考查非謂語動詞,as 是介詞,后面加名詞或動名詞.
10.simple 改為simply;考查副詞,此處用副詞形式作狀語修飾動詞mean.句意:對于那些受傷的人來說,幸福就是沒有苦痛或者就是活著.

點評 短文改錯時首先要通讀全文,了解短文基本大意,再結(jié)合上下文語境分析句子之間的關(guān)系,運用所掌握的基礎(chǔ)語言知識找出文中的錯誤所在.

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