Question

假如你是李華，Tracy 即將結束你們學校作為交換生的學習生活并返回英國，請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇歡送詞。
1、贊揚她的善良友好；
2、懷念與她相處的快樂時光；
3、感謝她對大家英語學習的幫助；
4、希望她有機會再來中國。
注意：1、詞數(shù)：120-150；
2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Dear teachers and friends,
I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England. Tracy is a very kind and friendly girl and I feel happy to be her friend. She gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with her. Whenever we have trouble learning English, she doesn’t hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since she came to our class. We owe a lot of thanks to Tracy.
True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with Tracy. I also hope that Tracy can come back to China and stay with us in the near future.
That’s all. Thank you.

解析試題分析：歡送辭是當客人離開時，在告別宴會或其他特定場合主人對客人表示惜別之情和表達祝愿時所使用的一種專用文書。
1. 歡送詞分為3個部分；稱呼語，正文，結束語。
2. 正文是致辭的主體，歡送辭要表達對客人在和大家相處這段時間的難忘之情，回顧彼此交往的過程或經(jīng)歷，同時對逗留期間所見所聞發(fā)表感想，并評價對方取得的成績和建立的友誼及貢獻。在正文結束時表達對對方的良好祝福和熱切希望。
3. 從語言特征上看，英語致辭的用詞要熱烈，誠懇，語句要簡潔明了，要比較口語化，不要太過咬文嚼字。
4. 常用客套話； We wish…a pleasant time…. May you have a pleasant time…，Wish you a good trip/journey back home! We are looking forward to seeing you again
【亮點說明】Tracy is a very kind and friendly girl and I feel happy to be her friend.這是并列句， She gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with her.這句話用了get along with sb“和某人相處”和have a wonderful time玩得愉快， Whenever we have trouble learning English, she doesn’t hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since she came to our class. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句和have trouble in doing“做…有困難”，We owe a lot of thanks to Tracy.這句話用了詞組：owe thanks to sb“向某人道謝”， I also hope that Tracy can come back to China and stay with us in the near future.這句話用了賓語從句。
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