Question

【題目】假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一場校園文化藝術(shù)表演，想邀請你校外籍教師Ann先生前來觀看并作評論。請你按照下面的內(nèi)容用英語給他寫一封電子郵件。

主題：Culture, Art and Our Campus

時(shí)間：5月31日上午8:30—11:30

地點(diǎn)：體育館

內(nèi)容：每班一個(gè)節(jié)目，歌曲、舞蹈、課本劇、故事、演講等形式不限

聯(lián)系人：李華（電話13613856789）

注意：

詞數(shù)：100左右（開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)）。

1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

2.參考詞匯：評論comment; 體育館gym；課本劇textbook drama

Dear Mrs. Ann,

I’m glad to tell you good news that a school culture and art show will be held in our school.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Mrs. Ann,

I’m glad to tell you good news that a school culture and art show will be held in our school. Here I’m writing to invite you to watch and give your valuable comments on our shows.

Now let me tell you something about the show. It will take place in our school gym from 8:30 to 11:30 am. on May 31st, the theme of which is“Culture, Art and Our Campus”. Each class is expected to provide one program. They will show their talent in the from of singing English songs, dancing and acting textbook dramas. Of course,telling stories or giving lectures is also included. I’m sure it will be a wonderful show.

I’d appreciate it if you could come. I’m looking forward to your reply. If you have any questions, please contact at 13613856789.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；你校將舉辦一場校園文化藝術(shù)表演，想邀請你校外籍教師Ann先生前來觀看并作評論，信中要告訴Ann先生表演的主題、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容和聯(lián)系方式；時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱使用第一人稱。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：school culture and art show（校園文化藝術(shù)表演），invite（邀請），comment（評論），school gym（校體育館），from 8:30 to 11:30 am. on May 31st（5月31日上午8:30—11:30），theme（主題），acting textbook dramas（課本劇）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如同位語從句I’m glad to tell you good news that a school culture and art show will be held in our school.；定語從句It will take place in our school gym from 8:30 to 11:30 am. on May 31st, the theme of which is“Culture, Art and Our Campus”.；虛擬語氣I’d appreciate it if you could come.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。