Question

15．最近，越來越多的學(xué)生在校外租房而不愿住大宿舍．請根據(jù)下面提示，一分為二地用英語寫一篇短文，說說兩者各自的好處與壞處，并表明自己的觀點．詞數(shù)100左右．
1．學(xué)習(xí)時間；  2．安全；  3．自由性；  4．與同學(xué)交往；  5．學(xué)習(xí)效果．
    注意：可從其他角度闡述，但兩方面的理由都至少要有兩條．
要求：字跡工整，段落清晰．
                                                                                
                                                                               

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇議論文，首先表明租房和住大宿舍有什么優(yōu)點和缺點，將對此現(xiàn)象表明自己的觀點提升為要點，更為重要進行闡述，再舉例對自己支持與否的說明，寫作中使用萬能句型造句，寫作主要考查學(xué)生綜合運用英語語言的能力，涉及學(xué)生的詞匯量，正確運用單詞的能力，對所學(xué)語法的掌握程度，能否按照英語習(xí)慣正確表達所要表達的意思的能力等等．
重要短語：rent houses（租房），enable sb．to do sth．（能讓某人做某事），adapt to（適應(yīng)），prepare for（為…做準(zhǔn)備），as for（至于…），devote oneself to doing sth．（致力于做某事），prefer doing sth．（寧愿做某事）
高分句型：
1．A dorm is more like a society，which enables students to learn to adapt to each other，thus preparing for the social life later．
此處是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞a society，preparing for是現(xiàn)在分詞短語充當(dāng)結(jié)果狀語．

解答 Nowadays，some students would not like to live in a dorm．Instead，they rent houses outside the school．There are advantages for both．Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates．And of course it is safer．A dorm is more like a society，which enables students to learn to adapt to each other，thus preparing for the social life later．As for renting houses to live alone，it's better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others．As a result，you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly．But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school．
Anyhow，as a student，I prefer living in a dorm．

點評 寫作時應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感．