Question

9．近年來，高中生在校外租房子的現(xiàn)象比較普遍，請結合以下要點談談自己的觀點．

贊同：	1．自由，無紀律約束；
	2．有更多的隱私權．
反對：	1．寢室有時雖然有點吵，但方便；
	2．能培養(yǎng)交際能力；
	3．能了解生活的價值，培養(yǎng)獨立能力．
自己的觀點：	…

注意：1．詞數120左右；
2．文章的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數；
3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
4．參考詞匯：寢室：dormitory；  隱私權：privacy
In recent years，it's common for high school students to rent houses outside．Different students have different opinions．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Apart from the freedom of the school rules，they can do whatever they like，such as staying up late，reading books or even surfing the Internet．
高分句型二：
 Others hold an opposite view that it's not worthwhile renting houses outside．
句型一 they can do whatever they like 該句中有一個由whatever引導的賓語從句，whatever在從句中作like的賓語
句型二 Others hold an opposite view that it's not worthwhile renting houses outside 該句中有一個由that引導的同位語從句，同位的名詞為view，that只作引導詞，不作句子成分
此外，該書面表達中還包含有以下重要短語和高級詞匯：
prefer to do sth   更喜歡做某事    wht's more 而且     be worthwhile doing sth   做某事是值得的    in addition  除此以外
該書面表達中的重要句型部分的從句的使用和高級短語和詞匯的使用，使得文章更層次分明，表述更加確切完整．

解答 In recent years，it's common for high school students to rent houses outside．Different students have different opinions．（提出觀點）
   Some students think that they prefer to live outside alone．Apart from the freedom of the school rules，they can do whatever they like，such as staying up late，reading books or even surfing the Internet．（高分句型一） What's more，it can give them more privacy．（贊同原因）
   Others hold an opposite view that it's not worthwhile renting houses outside．（高分句型二） Despite the fact that sometimes it's noisy to live in dormitories，it actually bring much convenience．Living in school can make us develop the ability of how to communication with others．In addition，we can also learn the value of life，thus building up self-independence．（反對理由）
   As far as I'm concerned，we students should treasure the opportunity to spend the rest time together in school．

點評 該書面表達為圖表類，通常都有一定的數據或者表格內容作為寫作參考和依據．考生應細致觀察圖表內容，用準確的、簡單明了的語言將圖表內容表達清楚．另外，平時應注意積累相應短語和詞匯，以使得行文有更多的亮點．