Question

6．假定你是劉瑩，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過重陽節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）．請給外教Trump寫封郵件，邀他一同前往，內容包括：
1．出發(fā)及返回時間；
2．活動：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．結語已為你寫好．
Dear Trump，
I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival．It is the day for the elderly in our culture．We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there．We'll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．【高分句型】（活動）We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon．（返回時間）If you are able to come with us，please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning．【高分句型】（出發(fā)時間）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Liu Ying．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應用文，根據所給要點給外教露西寫一封郵件，邀她一同前往敬老院陪老人們過重陽節(jié)，主要要點：1．出發(fā)及返回時間； 2．活動：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等．屬提綱作文．在寫作時人稱以第一人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般將來時為主．重要短語：invite you to do （邀請某人做…），make dumplings （包餃子），spend time （in）doing （花費時間…做），make sb happy （使某人高興），be able to do（能做某事），wait for sb（等候某人），at the school gate（在校門口），look forward to doing （期望做…）．
We'll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．【高分句型】
If you are able to come with us，please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning．【高分句型】

解答 Dear Trump，
      I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival．It is the day for the elderly in our culture．We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there．We'll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．【高分句型】（活動）We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon．（返回時間）If you are able to come with us，please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning．【高分句型】（出發(fā)時間） 
      Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Liu Ying

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．