Question

【題目】假定你是李華。你的筆友林濤來信說，因?qū)W習(xí)忙、鍛煉少，最近經(jīng)常生病，影響學(xué)習(xí)。請根據(jù)提示寫一封英文回信。

要點包括：1. 鍛煉的重要性：

2. 鍛煉有利學(xué)習(xí)；

3. 就出鍛煉建議。

注意 ：1.詞數(shù) 100左右

2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)， 以使行文連貫。

3.信的開頭和結(jié)犀己為你寫好。

Dear Lin Tao，

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lin Tao,

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health. It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future, for example, jogging and playing basketball.

Time spent in exercise is wasted. Actually, exercise can improve your physical conditions and ease your mind. Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.

Therefore, I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day. I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信。假定你是李華。你的筆友林濤來信說，因?qū)W習(xí)忙、鍛煉少，最近經(jīng)常生病，影響學(xué)習(xí)。請根據(jù)提示寫一封英文回信。要點包括：鍛煉的重要性；鍛煉有利學(xué)習(xí)； 就出鍛煉建議。寫好此文，需注意三點：一是寫信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文要點已經(jīng)給出。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。
【亮點說明】

本文是一封書信，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，文章層次分明，語句過渡自然，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health.句中so---that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句完美結(jié)合；It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future,句中使用if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；Time spent in exercise is wasted.過去分詞做后置定語；Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.句中使用部分倒裝；I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day.賓語從句里使用虛擬語氣；另外，be of great benefit to，for example, Therefore,等的運用盡顯文章風(fēng)采。