Question

【題目】假設你是王敏，你的英國網(wǎng)友Lauren最近在中國學習。她發(fā)電子郵件向你訴說了她的困擾：不適應新的生活學習環(huán)境，想家，感到很焦慮。請你根據(jù)以下要點給她寫一封電子郵件。

要點如下：

1. 表示理解并給予安慰；

2. 提出建議并給出理由。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Hi, Lauren,

I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time.

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Yours,

Wang Min

Answer 1

【答案】Hi, Lauren,

I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much.

Here are some tips for you. First, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. You will feel less homesick with many friends around you. Third, you should take part in some social activities. It will help you learn more about the

local customs and cultures.

I hope my advice will be useful.

Yours,

Wang Min

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇電子郵件。在中國學習的英國網(wǎng)友Lauren向你訴說了她的困擾：不適應新的生活學習環(huán)境，想家，感到很焦慮。根據(jù)以下要點給她寫一封電子郵件。

要點如下： 表示理解并給予安慰；提出建議并給出理由。寫作時根據(jù)所給要點，充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時把所提示的點寫全，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)。適當使用并列連詞，合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】

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