分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息你是高一年級(jí)的張洋,你的外教 Anne 打算暑假期間在四川旅游,請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封郵件.寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):推薦兩個(gè)旅游目的地,并分別闡述理由;感謝他一年來(lái)的教學(xué); 期待下期的學(xué)習(xí). 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):on the top of 處于頂端的;from home and abroad來(lái)自國(guó)內(nèi)外;pick up撿起,學(xué)會(huì);By the way順便說(shuō)一下;not only,but also 不僅,而且;Look forward to盼望;
Among the numerous scenic spots,the first choice is Jiuzhaigou,which is always on the top of the must-go destinations.(高分句型一)
Another recommendation is Jinsha Relics Museum in Chengdu,where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history.(高分句型二)
Through your international understanding courses,we not only develop our English abilities,but also have a better view of our world.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Anne,
Glad to know that you are planning a trip around Sichuan this summer vacation. It's my pleasure to offer you my suggestions.Among the numerous scenic spots,the first choice is Jiuzhaigou,which is always on the top of the must-go destinations.(高分句型一)It is the gorgeous natural scenery that attracts visitors from home and abroad.Another recommendation is Jinsha Relics Museum in Chengdu,where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history.(高分句型二)Good luck to your trip.
By the way,many thanks for teaching us during the past months.Through your international understanding courses,we not only develop our English abilities,but also have a better view of our world.(高分句型三)Look forward to attending your classes next term and enjoying greater progress.(112 words)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yang
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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