Question

【題目】請根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。

提示：時(shí)下，越來越多的學(xué)生使用的是電子詞典，而非紙質(zhì)詞典。請根據(jù)下表就此現(xiàn)象的利弊做出剖析，并提出自己的看法。

利	1.方便、快捷； 2．提供讀音； 3．附帶其他功能，如計(jì)算器。
弊	1.對眼睛有害，影響視力； 2．電子產(chǎn)品對環(huán)境的污染更大。

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays more and more students prefer electric dictionaries in their language learning.Generally，edictionaries have many advantages.First，it is more convenient and faster.Besides，with an edictionary the word can be accompanied with its pronunciation.Thirdly，an edictionary usually has other functions，for example，it may be used as a calculator.

But every coin has two sides.It also has some disadvantages.The important one is that it will do great harm to students’ eyes.To make matters worse，edictionaries mean more pollution than paper dictionaries.

As for me，I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary，which is more environmentallyfriendly and less harmful to my health.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇提綱類作文。文章采用三段式，語句嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級句子。with an edictionary the word can be accompanied with its pronunciation.句中使用含情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)；The important one is that it will do great harm to students’ eyes.句中that引導(dǎo)表語從句；I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary，which is more environmentallyfriendly and less harmful to my health.非限制性定語從句和比較級完美結(jié)合；另外，Generally，Besides，Thirdly，for example，To make matters worse，As for me，等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。