Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
There is a crack in everything, and that is how the light gets in.(Leonard Cohen, a Canadian singer)
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例；
④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和班級(jí)；
⑤詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

I still remember the day when I was left alone at home .I carelessly broke the vase, which was much treasured by my father. When he came back ,I was so fearful that I didn't tell the truth. The cat was my excuse. My father said nothing, but I could read his distrust .The next morning, after a restless night, I admitted to my father that it was my fault. I saw relief in his eyes. He smiled to me. From then on, I never told lies. My honesty won me great trust from others, which benefited my growth a lot. The accident, or exactly the “crack” forced me to mind my behavior.
It is the" crack "that is reminding me all the time that I have a long way to go. With the light through the crack I can see the road ahead clearly.

解析試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性短文閱讀。話題是There is a crack in everything,沒(méi)有什么事情是完美的。任何事物都有自己的瑕疵之處。關(guān)鍵在于我們?cè)撛趺蠢斫��？梢赃x取生活中發(fā)生的一件與此有關(guān)的實(shí)例來(lái)說(shuō)明任何事物都有瑕疵，但是并不影響價(jià)值。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
考點(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放性作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：開(kāi)放性作文只給出了一個(gè)話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。