Question

19．以下是2014年中國(guó)某城市交通事故發(fā)生原因的調(diào)查信息統(tǒng)計(jì)表，請(qǐng)根據(jù)此表，寫(xiě)一篇120-150字的文章．你的文章需包括：
1．簡(jiǎn)要描述下表
2．談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh

Main accident causes	Number or accidents in 2014	Percentage rise （+） or fall （-） over 2013
1．drivers turning left without due care	608	+10%
2．drivers traveling too close to other vehicles	411	+9%
3．pedestrians crossing roads carelessly	401	+12%
4．drivers driving under the influence of alcohol	281	+15%
5．drivers failing to give a signal	254	-5%

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類(lèi)"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于2014年中國(guó)某城市交通事故發(fā)生原因的調(diào)查信息統(tǒng)計(jì)的文章，既是提綱作文又是圖表類(lèi)作文．
時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：witness sth（見(jiàn)證，目睹某物），alarge number of（許多），bedue to （由于），thelack of …（…的缺乏），be responsible for （對(duì)…負(fù)責(zé)），imposestiff new penalties （實(shí)施嚴(yán)厲的新處罰），reinforce one's awareness （強(qiáng)化某人的意識(shí)），remindsb of sth （提醒某人某物），indispensable （不可缺少的，責(zé)無(wú)旁貸的）．
【高分句型】
1．the year of 2014 has witnessed a large number of traffic accidents in a certain Chinese city，which are due to five main causes．
這里是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代前面主句的內(nèi)容．
2．the public traffic safety education should be widely spread，reinforcing both drivers'and pedestrians'safety awareness．
這里是現(xiàn)在分詞reinforcing作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句主語(yǔ)the public traffic safety education與動(dòng)詞reinforce構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
3．No matter what measures are taken，the real intention is not to punish but to remind people of the preciousness of life．
這里是由No matter what引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 As what can be seen from the above table，theyear of 2014 has witnessed a large number of traffic accidents ina certain Chinese city，which are due to five main causes．【高分句型】Among them，drivers'careless turning left isthe leading one followed by drivers'driving under the influence of alcohol becauseof its largest percentage increase．（描述表格）
What hide behind these five causes aredrivers'neglect of traffic rules and the lack of reverence for life，thepedestrians'life．And，of course，pedestrians should also be responsible fortheir own life．（看法）Therefore，relevant authorities shouldimpose stiff new penalties，including paying large amounts of fines and criminalcharges，on drivers caught because of drunk driving or other illegal behaviors．And also，the public traffic safety education should be widely spread，reinforcingboth drivers'and pedestrians'safety awareness．【高分句型】No matter what measures are taken，the realintention is not to punish but to remind people of the preciousness of life．【高分句型】You should know that for your families，youare the indispensable one．Cherish life，love life．（建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．