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4．"五•一"小長假即將開始，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愦蛩闳绾伟才拍愕募倨谏�活．�?nèi)容要點應(yīng)包括：
*和同學(xué)一起野餐
*反思半學(xué)期以來的學(xué)習(xí)，確定新的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法
*補習(xí)弱科
①短文的內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；
②短文單詞數(shù)：100詞左右
③參考詞匯：去野餐go for a picnic  反思reflect on  學(xué)習(xí)方法 studying method
④開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
The May Day holiday is coming．We all feel excited about it．After all，after two months'study，we are all very tired．First，I will go for a picnic with my classmates．The weather in May is always very fine．I'm sure we'll have great fun and relax ourselves a lot．Second，I will reflect on my study in the last two months to find my shortcomings．Then，I will set a new goal and improve my studying method in order to make greater progress in the near future．The third thing that I want to do is to learn some English，because my English is not very good（高分句型一）．But I know it is very important if I'm to succeed（高分句型二）．Of course，I am also going to help my mother do some housework．（五一小長假的計劃安排）
Now，I am looking forward to enjoying my life in the holiday．I believe it can be very wonderful．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇作文，談?wù)劥蛩闳绾伟才拍愕奈逡恍￠L假生活，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般將來時，內(nèi)容要點包括：和同學(xué)一起野餐；反思半學(xué)期以來的高中生活，確定新的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方
法，補習(xí)弱科；幫助家長做家務(wù)活．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為五一小長假的計劃安排．第二部分為期盼五一小長假的迫切心情．
重點短語與句型：After all 畢竟；reflect on 反思；make progress 取得進(jìn)步； do some housework做家務(wù)；look forward to盼望；
高分句型一：The third thing that I want to do is to learn some English，because my English is not very good．此句用了that引導(dǎo)定語從句，because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句．
高分句型二：But I know it is very important if I'm to succeed．此句用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句．

解答 The May Day holiday is coming．We all feel excited about it．After all，after two months'study，we are all very tired．First，I will go for a picnic with my classmates．The weather in May is always very fine．I'm sure we'll have great fun and relax ourselves a lot．Second，I will reflect on my study in the last two months to find my shortcomings．Then，I will set a new goal and improve my studying method in order to make greater progress in the near future．The third thing that I want to do is to learn some English，because my English is not very good（高分句型一）．But I know it is very important if I'm to succeed（高分句型二）．Of course，I am also going to help my mother do some housework．（五一小長假的計劃安排）
      Now，I am looking forward to enjoying my life in the holiday．I believe it can be very wonderful．（期盼五一小長假的迫切心情）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．