Question

高三階段學(xué)習(xí)比較緊張，正確的學(xué)習(xí)方法尤為重要。最近你向你的同學(xué)們作了一個調(diào)查，下表體現(xiàn)了兩種不同的學(xué)習(xí)方法，請用英語簡述并發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。 

學(xué)習(xí)方法	白天	晚上
一些同學(xué)	上課專心聽講，盡可能經(jīng)常向老師請教疑難問題。	花較少時間完成作業(yè)，早點(diǎn)休息。
另一些同學(xué)	上課打瞌睡，漏掉了許多要點(diǎn)。	花較多的時間完成作業(yè)，熬夜學(xué)習(xí)。
你的觀點(diǎn)	。。。。。。

注意：1. 可對所給要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)120左右。

Answer 1

Recently I have made a survey in my class on how they study. They have different learning methods.
Some students listen to teachers attentively in class, trying to catch everything the teacher say. Besides, they often consult teachers if they have some problems. Therefore, they spend less time doing their homework, so they can go to bed earlier and they always keep energetic in the daytime.
However, others have quite a different way of learning. They stay up late at night doing their homework, so they often feel sleepy in class. As a result, they miss lots of key points and it usually takes them more time to finish their homework.
In my opinion, the former method is more effective. Only in an efficient way can we improve our study. Meanwhile, we’ll have more time to enjoy ourselves.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：話題是不同學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)方法，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Recently I have made a survey in my class on how they study. 這句話用了賓語從句， Some students listen to teachers attentively in class, trying to catch everything the teacher say. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，they often consult teachers if they have some problems. 這句話用了條件狀語從句，they spend less time doing their homework, so they can go to bed earlier and they always keep energetic in the daytime.這句話用了結(jié)果狀語從句， they miss lots of key points and it usually takes them more time to finish their homework.這句話用了形式主語it， Only in an efficient way can we improve our study. 這句話用了倒裝句。還有文章還使用了Besides, Therefore, However, As a result, In my opinion,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。