Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I am more than glad to tell you about my trip in Xi’an, a capital city of Shaanxi Province.

What impresses me deep are its natural scenery and long history. First, as it is known to the world, Xi’an has a long history and the birthplace of Chinese civilization. Its cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as so many historical sites, help Xi’an enjoy the title of “Natural History Museum”. The Terracotta Warriors, as example, are praised as “the eight wonder of the world”. Second, it is in a favorable georgraphical location surrounding by the Wei River and Qinling. I have also climbed Mount Hua, one of the five most famous mountains in China, what is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and unique characteristics.

It is really worthy visiting, and I’m looking forward to your coming.

Answer 1

【答案】1.a---the

2. deep—deeply

3. it刪掉

4. ∧is the birthplace

5. help—helps

6. as—for

7. eight—eighth

8. surrounding---surrounded

9. what—which

10. worthy—worth

【解析】1.句意：西安，陜西的省會。此處表示特指，故把a---the。

2.副詞修飾動詞，故把deep—deeply。

3.固定結(jié)構(gòu)： as is known to---，眾所周知，---，故把it去掉。

4.句意：西安有悠久的歷史，它是中國文明的發(fā)源地。故在the birthplace前加is。

5.此處Its cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as so many historical sites是由as well as連接的并列主語，后面的謂語動詞和前面的主語保持一致，單數(shù)第三人稱形式，句子是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，故把help—helps。

6.固定詞組：for example例如，故把as—for。

7.句意：世界第八大奇跡。此處應(yīng)該用序數(shù)詞，故把eight—eighth。

8.此處是過去分詞做后置定語，故把surrounding---surrounded。

9.此處Mount Hua,做先行詞，在后面的非限制性定語從句中做主語，指物，故把what—which。

10. 固定搭配：be worth doing sth.值得做某事，故把worthy—worth。