【題目】中國(guó)民工學(xué)校狀況越來越受到人們的關(guān)注，假設(shè)你是李華，你和你的同學(xué)共同對(duì)你所在的城市的民工學(xué)校進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。了解情況之后你寫信給英語周報(bào)，呼吁全社會(huì)關(guān)注民工學(xué)校，幫助民工子弟。

[寫作內(nèi)容]：

民工學(xué)校的現(xiàn)狀

1、設(shè)施簡(jiǎn)陋

2、師資缺乏

3、民工子弟熱愛學(xué)習(xí)

改善民工學(xué)�，F(xiàn)狀的建議

政府方面：資金的投入

學(xué)生方面：...... （至少提兩個(gè)建議）

呼吁全社會(huì)的人關(guān)注民工學(xué)校

[寫作要求]

1、只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)所有寫作內(nèi)容，信的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入句子個(gè)數(shù)。

2、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

[參考詞匯]：民工學(xué)校：migrant school

【答案】

Dear Editor，

Recently, my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city. Problems do exist.

Owing to the lack of money, most migrant schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no libraries, and even not enough teachers. However, we find that the migrant kids are just as keen on study as us. In order to improve the situation, we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools. As for us, the local students, can help to collect money or donate books to them. We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids, because if everyone contributes a bit, migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity.

Yours sincerely

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：中國(guó)民工學(xué)校狀況越來越受到人們的關(guān)注，假設(shè)你是李華，你和你的同學(xué)共同對(duì)你所在的城市的民工學(xué)校進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。了解情況之后你寫信給英語周報(bào)，呼吁全社會(huì)關(guān)注民工學(xué)校，幫助民工子弟。民工學(xué)校的現(xiàn)狀：1、設(shè)施簡(jiǎn)陋2、師資缺乏3、民工子弟熱愛學(xué)習(xí)；改善民工學(xué)�，F(xiàn)狀的建議：1、政府方面：資金的投入2、學(xué)生方面：...... （至少提兩個(gè)建議）3、呼吁全社會(huì)的人關(guān)注民工學(xué)校。要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，把漢語翻譯成通順的英語句子，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。一定避免全部使用簡(jiǎn)單句。寫作要求1、只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)所有寫作內(nèi)容，信的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入句子個(gè)數(shù)；2、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】Problems do exist句中使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語，很有特點(diǎn)；However, we find that the migrant kids are just as keen on study as us.句中運(yùn)用了賓語從句；In order to improve the situation, we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools.動(dòng)詞不定式在句中使用的恰到好處，同時(shí)還運(yùn)用了賓語從句；As for us, the local students, can help to collect money or donate books to them.句中使用了同位語更顯文采；We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids, because if everyone contributes a bit, migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity. 強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語再次使用，賓語從句、原因狀語從句、條件狀語從句將文章推向了高潮。

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