Question

9．上個(gè)月，兩名來自美國的交流生（exchange student）在你家住了兩周．請你根據(jù)下面所給的提示，寫一篇英語短文．
1．相處融洽；
2．提高了自己的英語口語；
3．相互了解了對方的文化；
4．父母為他們做了傳統(tǒng)的中國美食．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 兩名來自美國的交流生（exchange student）在你家住了兩周．請你根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫一篇英語短文．相處融洽、提高了自己的英語口語、相互了解了對方的文化、父母為他們做了傳統(tǒng)的中國美食．注意使用一些過渡句或過渡詞來使句子讀起來流暢．但是要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤，語法錯誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個(gè)從句組成的長句．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】行文流暢，簡潔明了，高級短語和結(jié)構(gòu)為文章增色不少．高級短語：had a deeper and better understanding of the differences 對差異有了更好更深入的理解．warm-hearted parents，熱心的父母．made a lot of delicious traditional Chinese food做了許多美味的中國菜．句式：lso took them to the snack street，where they tasted many traditional Chinese snacks．使用了非限制性定語從句，

解答 Last month two American exchange students stayed in my home for two weeks．We got along well with each other and learned a lot from each other．They helped me much with my oral English because communicating with the native English speakers is a good way to improve my oral English．（高級句型）During their stay，we chatted a lot about both Chinese and American cultures and customs．Therefore，we had a deeper and better understanding of the differences between the two cultures．（高級句型）Besides，my warm-hearted parents made a lot of delicious traditional Chinese food for them．I also took them to the snack street，where they tasted many traditional Chinese snacks．（高級句型）
      In a word，we had a great time last month．

點(diǎn)評 提綱類寫作的文章較開放式的文體，比較好寫．學(xué)生在寫作的過程中，首先思路要清晰，要對所表達(dá)的句子通順的說出來，遇到不會的要學(xué)會替換所用語，來達(dá)到同樣的意思．在每一篇作文中，對于表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來加強(qiáng)文章的層次感，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用俗語，運(yùn)用平時(shí)常用的句式來使文章富有變化，表達(dá)地道得體．