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10．我校英語社擬邀請一位國際知名人士到校舉辦講座，現(xiàn)就受邀嘉賓向全校學(xué)生廣泛征求意見，假設(shè)你是李華，請在三位備選嘉賓（one of the world's billionaires，an astronaut，a volunteer of WWF）中推薦一位并給英語社社長寫一封信表達你的想法，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1、推薦該嘉賓的理由（至少兩條）；
2、你期待的講座內(nèi)容（至少兩條）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100 詞；
2．無須寫出推薦嘉賓姓名；
3．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；
4．開頭語已為你寫好．
Dear Sir，
It is such exciting news that the English club is to invite a world renowned figure to give us a lecture．
               

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，我校英語社擬邀請一位國際知名人士到校舉辦講座，現(xiàn)就受邀嘉賓向全校學(xué)生廣泛征求意見，假設(shè)你是李華，請在三位備選嘉賓（one of the world's billionaires，an astronaut，a volunteer of WWF）中推薦一位并給英語社社長寫一封信表達你的想法，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1、推薦該嘉賓的理由（至少兩條）；2、你期待的講座內(nèi)容（至少兩條）．寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100 詞； 2．無須寫出推薦嘉賓姓名；3．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；4．開頭語已為你寫好．
【亮點說明】高級句式、高級詞匯、短語的運用是這篇文章的一大亮點．It is such exciting news that the English club is to invite a world renowned figure to give us a lecture．句中運用結(jié)果狀語從句；If I could recommend one，I would go for an experienced astronaut who has once set foot on another planet or lived and worked in a space station．If引導(dǎo)的虛擬語氣和定語從句完美結(jié)合；Since childhood，nothing has made me more fascinated than the blinking stars in the sky．Since的使用，句子用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)；Staring into the deep universe，I'm always left puzzled by the unknown heavens現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；As for the speech content，what I am most curious about is the potential of discovering unknown life forms on other planets．主語從句在句中體現(xiàn)．

解答 Dear Sir，
       It is such exciting news that the English club is to invite a world renowned figure to give us a lecture．If I could recommend one，I would go for an experienced astronaut who has once set foot on another planet or lived and worked in a space station．（高分句型一）
       Since childhood，nothing has made me more fascinated than the blinking stars in the sky．Staring into the deep universe，I'm always left puzzled by the unknown heavens and I expect no one else can better explain the mysteries of the outer space than an astronaut．（高分句型二）Besides，an astronaut's experience is bound to inspire creativity and passion for astronomy in us young generations．Thus，it would be a crime not to follow an astronaut's lecture if we had a chance．
       As for the speech content，what I am most curious about is the potential of discovering unknown life forms on other planets．（高分句型三） The question of how astronauts carry out their daily routines in weak gravity appeals to me as well．
       I would appreciate your kind consideration of my requests．Looking forward to the lecture actually taking place．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours respectfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．