Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best. However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives. Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations. That’s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems. Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don’t want to follow them. With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right. Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time.

Answer 1

【答案】Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best．However，

consider

it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have

serious problems in our lives．Parents have gained some life experiences and they know

experience

what to act in different situations．That's why we should ask them for help first when

how

they have problems．Therefore, there, are moments when we avoid them and don't want

we However

to follow them．With time passed , my brother as well as Ihaverealized that our

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parents are right．Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they ∧ worth

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trusting and ready to offer help all the time．

【解析】

本文是一篇議論文。一般來說，我們喜歡按照我們認(rèn)為是最好的方法來做事情，可是當(dāng)我們有問題時向那些愛我們的人尋求建議也是很重要的，因為父母有生活經(jīng)驗。但是有時我們也會避開他們，不想遵循他們的建議，然而隨著時間的流逝，我們會知道父母是值得信任的．

第一處：考查謂語動詞的時態(tài)。本文通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時陳述一個事實，所以此處也要用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以將considered改為consider。
第二處：考查冠詞。advice作為"建議"講是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用不定冠詞a/an修飾，故去掉an，"一條建議"譯為"a piece of advice"。所以去掉an。
第三處：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。experience作為"經(jīng)驗"講時是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把experiences改為experience。
第四處：考查疑問詞。分析句意應(yīng)為"他們知道在不同情況下該怎樣去做"，所以此處應(yīng)該用how表示一種方式，而不用what，故將what改成how。
第五處：考查人稱代詞，結(jié)合上下文分析，句意為"這就是當(dāng)我們遇到問題時首先應(yīng)該向他們請教的原因"，所以they應(yīng)該改為we，表明"我們遇到問題"，所以將they改為we。
第六處：考查副詞。結(jié)合上下文，前面講到"遇到問題我們應(yīng)該首先去請教他們"，后面又說"有時我們會避開他們不想遵循他們的做法"，兩者之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故此處應(yīng)該用However在意義上表示轉(zhuǎn)折，所以將Therefore改為However。
第七處：考查非謂語動詞。with是介詞，后面不能跟完整的句子，要用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)為：with+賓語+賓語補足語。time與動詞pass是主謂關(guān)系，所以此處用動詞ing形式，所以將passed改為passing。
第八處：考查主謂一致。在這里as well as連接并列成分，作為"也，還"講，重點強調(diào)前者，后者只是順便提及，前者是主語，這時謂語動詞與前者保持一致，主語為my brother，為單數(shù)，謂語動詞也應(yīng)該用單數(shù)，所以將have改為has。
第九處：考查固定搭配，turn to是固定短語，此處意為"求助于"，所以將for改為to。
第十處：考查固定短語，be worth doing是固定短語，意為"值得做…"，所以將worth前面加are。