Question

假設你是李華。5月13日是母親節(jié)，你的美國朋友Sandy問中國的孩子在這一天有何打算。請你根據以下提示，給她寫一封回信, 可增加內容，談談你要做的事情，并簡單說明原因。
開頭與結尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
1．有些人幫助母親做家務； 2．有些人為母親買禮物；3．還有的買或自制賀卡送給母親；4.我打算……
要求：100字左右。
Dear Sandy,
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Yours,
Li hua

Answer 1

Dear Sandy
I’m very glad to receive your letter．In your letter, you asked me what we
would do on Mother’s Day in China．Here I would like to tell you something about it.
Generally speaking, some of us would like to help our mothers do some housework, such as tidying the rooms or washing  some clothes, for we are very thankful for all the work they have done for us．Some would like to buy some presents for mothers or send a card. Those who work or study far from their houses can make a phone call and give their best wishes to their mothers. Anyway, we often express our love and gratitude to our mothers in our own way.
As for me, this year I would like to send my mother some flowers as a gift, wishing her to be much younger and happier．Besides, I am going to write her a card, telling her how much she means to me and that I’ll try my best to live up to her expectations．
Have you got any other ideas? Look forward to your reply．
Yours,
Li hua

考查應用文中的書信的寫作。同時也屬于提綱類作文，談談中國的孩子在母親節(jié)這一天有何打算，提綱類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，要點都已經給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述，，Those who work or study far from their houses can make a phone call and give their best wishes to their mothers.這句話有定語從句，還有運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。As for me ，Besides,等詞的使用使文章很順暢。