【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Help others can make us happy. Bad luck fell on one of my classmate one day. She suddenly became so sick to move her legs. She was sent to hospital quickly, needing to be operated on immediately. And the cost was so much that her single parent couldn’t afford it. Nobody was willing see that. Our school call on all the students to donate money to her. As everyone knows, many hands can make a work easier. With all our efforts, our students collected nearly 8000 yuan for her. We hope to see that she used to be-a health and happy girl.

【答案】第一句 Help→Helping

第二句 classmate→classmates

第三句 so→too

第五句 And→But

第六句 see前面加上to

第七句 call→called

第八句 work前面的a刪掉

第九句 our→we

第十句 that→what；health→healthy

【解析】

本文屬于記敘文，講述作者的一個同學得重病，家里無力承擔，學校呼吁大家為她捐款，幫助其度過難關。

第一處：考查非謂語形式。句意：幫助他人讓我們更快樂。分析本句，Help others在句中作主語，故用其現(xiàn)在分詞形式，故改為Helping。

第二處：考查名詞。句意：我的一個同學遭遇不幸。One of后接可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)形式，故改為classmates。

第三處：考查副詞。句意：同學病的如此嚴重以至于無法挪動雙腿。此處為結構too… to（太……而不能），故改為too。

第四處：考查連詞。句意：手術費用太高，她的父母無力承擔。根據(jù)語境可知，前后句之間為轉折關系，病的很嚴重，但是無力承擔費用，故改為but。

第五處：考查動詞不定式。句意：沒人愿意看見這種情況。此處為結構be willing to do sth (愿意做某事)，不定式to后接動詞原形，故加to。

第六處：考查動詞時態(tài)。句意：我們學校呼吁所有同學為她捐款。根據(jù)語境可知，作者講述的是過去的事情，call在句中作謂語，故用一般過去時called。

第七處：考查冠詞。work是抽象名詞，前面不用冠詞修飾，故把a刪掉。

第八處：考查代詞。句意：在所有人的努力下，我們?yōu)樗I集了8000元。根據(jù)文章可知，是作者的一個同學生病了，因此作者的身份是學生，因此本句應該把作者包含在內(nèi)，students在句中作our的同位語，應用we。

第九處：考查名詞性從句引導詞。句意：我希望看到一個跟過去一樣的女孩-幸福又健康。通過分析，that she used to be作see的賓語，從句中缺乏be的表語，表示“所……的”，因而需要用what。

第十處：考查形容詞。health修飾girl作定語，故用其形容詞形式healthy。

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