Question

“No Thanksgiving would be no virtue”（沒(méi)有感恩就沒(méi)有真正的美德。）如今社會(huì)上一些人缺乏感恩之心，少數(shù)人甚至在父母年老體弱時(shí)都不愿意贍養(yǎng)。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際，談幾點(diǎn)父母值得你感恩的地方，以及將來(lái)你會(huì)做些什么來(lái)報(bào)答父母的養(yǎng)育之恩。
注意：
1.短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。
2.詞數(shù)100-120
3.感恩：thanksgiving
Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow. _______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow.
I’m very grateful to my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost accompanied me the whole night. Now I’m in Senior 3.Luckily for me, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words. Furthermore, they give me enough personal space, which I appreciate so much.
What I should do now is to study hard. When I grow up, I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.

試題分析:本文考察提綱作為。首先，學(xué)生要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。 另外要注意提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)， 按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。 最后，要根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。本文主要寫(xiě)要學(xué)會(huì)感恩，主要是對(duì)父母感恩，為什么要感謝父母？怎樣感謝？這都要要在文章中表現(xiàn)出來(lái)。
亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：全文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，段落分明。用了一些很好的短語(yǔ)，如：be grateful to , spare no efforts to do另外還用了一些從句，如：I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost accompanied me the whole night.給文章添色不少。