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酒駕是一個(gè)談?wù)摵芫玫脑掝}。酒駕釀成的悲劇一直在發(fā)生， 盡管國(guó)家出臺(tái)了嚴(yán)厲的法規(guī)， 但是依舊屢禁不止。前有高曉松，近有王志文，這些名人大腕們都沒能避免。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你針對(duì)酒駕這一現(xiàn)象，給報(bào)社寫一篇英文書信， 并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?

1. 詞數(shù)；100詞左右，  2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫，通順。

3. 參考詞匯；酒駕， drunk driving

Dear Sir,

Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently,

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently, even some famous persons like Gao Xiaosong and Wang Zhiwen involved in.

I am opposed to drunk driving and severer punishment is necessary. For one thing, bans on drunk driving help protect the safety of others and their wealth. If someone drives after drinking, it is a great danger to all the others. For another, bans on drunk driving are helpful to the drivers themselves. As we all know, many drivers lose their lives because of drunk driving every year, which also makes their family into great trouble.

Thus, in my opinion, anyone mustn’t drive after drinking wine, let alone drunk driving. Remember: never drive your car after drinking and drive without drinking forever.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于議論文文體，議論文的文章首先要對(duì)文章所表達(dá)核心主旨進(jìn)行把握好，不要跑題。對(duì)于本文的寫作首先表明自己明確的觀點(diǎn)，反對(duì)酒駕I am opposed to drunk driving and severer punishment is necessary.然后從兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行闡述一是酒駕的禁令幫助保護(hù)別人的安全和健康bans on drunk driving help protect the safety of others and their wealth.另一方面也保護(hù)著司機(jī)本人bans on drunk driving are helpful to the drivers themselves.最后對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行總結(jié)，提出自己的忠告never drive your car after drinking.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作

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