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增加：此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（/\），在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
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注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Dear Andy，
I'm glad to hear from you．You ask about my health in your last email．So I'm going to tell  you about diet．I'm a very health person．That's why we live near the sea and we often have fish．I don't know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight，and there will probable be fish and vegetables．And of course there will also be some rices．If you come to visit me in China on one day，you won't eat many sweets．So I hope you don't have sweet tooth．
I'm going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I'll email them  to you．I think you'll like our team's clothes．

分析 這是一封寫給朋友的信，介紹了作者的飲食．作者住在海邊，經(jīng)常吃魚．我還讓父親拍了球賽的照片，會(huì)用郵件發(fā)給你，你會(huì)喜歡我們的隊(duì)服的．

解答 Dear Andy，
I'm glad to hear from you．You ask about my health in your last email．So I'm going to tell  you about∧diet．I'm a very health person．That's why we live near the sea and we often have fish．I don't know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight，and there will probable be fish and vegetables．And of course there will also be some rices．If you come to visit me in China on one day，you won't eat many sweets．So I hope you don't have∧sweet tooth．
I'm going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I'll email them  to you．I think you'll like our team's clothes．
詳解：
1．a(chǎn)sk改成asked；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是過去發(fā)生的動(dòng)作，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．     
2．diet前加my；句意表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是我想告訴你我的飲食情況．          
3．health改為healthy；形容詞錯(cuò)誤．句中health修飾名詞person，要用形容詞形式．         
4．why改為because；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是原因．
 5．a(chǎn)nd改為but；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折，不是承接．      
6．probable改為probably；副詞錯(cuò)誤．句中probable修飾謂語部分，要用副詞形式．        
7．rices改為rice；名詞錯(cuò)誤．句中rice是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)．        
8．去掉on；介詞錯(cuò)誤．句中one day作時(shí)間狀語，不用介詞．         
 9．加a；短語搭配錯(cuò)誤．have a sweet tooth愛吃甜食，常用短語．               
10．for改為of；短語搭配錯(cuò)誤．take photos of拍照．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．

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