Question

【題目】寫作

假設(shè)你是李平，最近參加了由某電視臺(tái)舉辦的中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽并獲獎(jiǎng)，該臺(tái)準(zhǔn)備組織獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)呷ケ本﹨⒓右淮斡⒄Z(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)就有關(guān)事項(xiàng)征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提供的信息用英語(yǔ)以書信形式給予答復(fù)。請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。

活動(dòng)時(shí)間	7月15日～22日或8月15日～22日
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容	參加英語(yǔ)角 學(xué)唱英語(yǔ)歌曲 聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)講座 表演英語(yǔ)短劇 看英語(yǔ)電影 教外賓學(xué)中文
對(duì)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容的 建議或要求

請(qǐng)注意：

1. 選擇適合你的時(shí)間，并說(shuō)明理由；

2. 選擇兩項(xiàng)你喜歡的活動(dòng)，并說(shuō)明理由；

3. 對(duì)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容提出至少一個(gè)建議或要求；

4. 詞數(shù)：100左右；信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

Dear Sir or Madame,

I'm very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

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Thank you very much.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madame,

I'm very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

I prefer to go in July because I'll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I'd like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the development of economy and technology, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.

It's been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?

Thank you very much.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是寫一封信，假設(shè)你是李平，最近參加了由某電視臺(tái)舉辦的中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽并獲獎(jiǎng)，該臺(tái)準(zhǔn)備組織獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)呷ケ本﹨⒓右淮斡⒄Z(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)就有關(guān)事項(xiàng)征求你的意見(jiàn)。考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系。靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

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