Question

假如你是李華，上周在英國(guó)參加了你校組織的“中學(xué)生文化交流周”活動(dòng)，并住在Kelly家里。請(qǐng)你給在英國(guó)期間認(rèn)識(shí)的新朋友Kelly寫封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：

交流活動(dòng)中的收獲;

難忘在Kelly家的美好日子;

感謝她送你的英文詞典。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

提示詞匯：文化交流周 Cultural Exchange Week

Dear Kelly,

   I’ve been back home safely from England.                                                

                                                                                    

                                                                                     

                                                                                    

   Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Kelly,

   I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.

   Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.

   What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together.

Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.

   Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇書信。文章給出了提綱式漢語提示。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意一下幾點(diǎn)：（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全；a交流活動(dòng)中的收獲;b難忘在Kelly家的美好日子;c感謝她送你的英文詞典。（2）人稱：以第一人稱為主；（3）時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；（4）適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢；（5）恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】1.使用高級(jí)句型：（1）I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.（2）It’s a great help for me to learn English well.2.使用了過渡詞語：What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. Of course, I also made many new friends. 3.使用了重要短語：I will treasure and make full use of it. I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country.

考點(diǎn)：考查書信類書面表達(dá)。