Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

There was a rich man who carried many treasures to look into happiness. But after a long march, he fails to find happiness. Annoyed, he sat by a path of the mountain while a farmer carrying a large bunch of firewood came down from the mountain. The rich man said, “I’m a wealth man. Can you tell me that why I’m unhappy?” The farmer put down the heavy firewood, wiped the sweat pleasant and said, “Happiness is very simple: put down and you’ll be happy!” The rich man inspired suddenly. Anxious and tiring all day, he carried that heavy jewelry, afraid of being robbed or murdered. How could you be happy? So the rich man helped the poor with jewelry and money, doing some good deed. He enjoyed the taste of happiness.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.into 改為for

考查固定搭配。句意：有一個富人帶著許多財寶尋找幸福。Look for…尋找，look into…朝里看，調查。富人去尋找幸福的，所以要把into 改為for.

2.fails改為failed

考查謂語動詞的時態(tài)。本文主要講述的是過去的事，故要用一般過去時，因此要把fails 改failed.

3.while 改為when

考查關系副詞。句意：他坐在一條山路旁，這個時候一個扛著一大堆柴火的農夫從山上下來。當從句的謂語動詞是短暫性動詞，而且主句的謂語動詞也是短暫性動詞時，一般用when。 分析本句的主從句的謂語動詞可知都是短暫性動詞（sit和came），故要用when.