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14．最近學(xué)校正在展開一場急救知識普及活動，就此你所在的班級舉行了一場討論會，并提出以下幾點建議．現(xiàn)請你根據(jù)以下要點以First Aid in Fires 為題寫一篇文章，說明發(fā)生火災(zāi)時要注意的幾點事項，貼在班級的板報上．
注意事項：
1．不要驚慌，保持冷靜；
2．室內(nèi)有濃煙時，身體盡量低一些，用濕毛巾捂住鼻子和嘴巴逃出；
3．不要乘坐電梯或從高層跳下；
4．你自己還有什么好的建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
First Aid in Fires
It is important to know what to do when you are in dangerous situations such as a fire．So please readthe following tips which must help you when a fire happens．（點明主題）
When you are caught in a fire，don't panic．Firstly，you should call 119 and report it to firemen at once．If you are in thick smoke，keep close to the ground and use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose．Secondly，don't take a lift or jump from a high building．You can fasten ropes to something that's fixed and then slide down the building．Thirdly，don't be unwilling to leave your money or other things behind．You should try to get away from the fire as quickly as you can．After all，life is more important．Once you get out of the fire，don't go back into it again．（火災(zāi)發(fā)生時具體的建議）
We cann't predict what will happen next second，so keep the tips in mind to nip it in the bud．（再次提示注意這些建議的重要性）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于發(fā)生火災(zāi)時要注意的幾點事項的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第二人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明主題；二火災(zāi)發(fā)生時具體的建議；三再次提示注意這些建議的重要性．
高分句型：
1．So please read the following tips which must help you when a fire happens．句子里which引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞the following tips；when 引導(dǎo)從句的時間狀語從句．
所以請閱讀下面的建議，當(dāng)火災(zāi)發(fā)生的時候，這些建議肯定會幫到你．
2．You can fasten ropes to something that's fixed and then slide down the building．句子里fasten…to…表示"把…栓到…"； that引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞something．
你可以把繩子栓到一個固定好的物體上，然后從樓上滑下來．

解答 First Aid in Fires
     It is important to know what to do when you are in dangerous situations such as a fire．So please read the following tips which must help youwhen a fire happens．【高分句型一】（點明主題）
    When you are caught in a fire，don't panic．Firstly，you should call 119 and report it to firemen at once．If you are in thick smoke，keep close to the ground and use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose．Secondly，don't take a lift or jump from a high building．You can fasten ropes to something that's fixed and then slide down the building．【高分句型二】Thirdly，don't be unwilling to leave your money or other things behind．You should try to get away from the fire as quickly as you can．After all，life is more important．Once you get out of the fire，don't go back into it again．（火災(zāi)發(fā)生時具體的建議）
      You cann't predict what will happen next second，so keep the tips in mind to nip it in the bud．（再次提示注意這些建議的重要性）

點評 考查提綱類作文．
這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．