Question

第一節(jié) 基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作 （共1小題；滿分15分）
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
目前，越來(lái)越多的青少年參加各類電視節(jié)目的才藝表演（talent shows）。對(duì)此，中學(xué)生的看法各有不同。

贊同	不贊同
展示才藝，增加社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)； 增強(qiáng)自信； 有利于學(xué)生全面（overall adj.）發(fā)展。	模仿多，沒(méi)有自己的風(fēng)格； 沉迷于“明星夢(mèng)”，無(wú)心學(xué)習(xí)； 有上當(dāng)受騙的危險(xiǎn)。

【寫(xiě)作要求】
必須用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容；
將5個(gè)句子組成連貫的短文。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
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Answer 1

At present an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in all kinds of TV talent shows, about which students’ opinions are divided. Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art, contributing to their social experience and build up their confidence. What’s more, it’s good for their overall development. However, other students hold the different opinion / view that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing somethng original and that they don’t have their own style. Besides, some are too lost in pursuing stars to concentrate on their studies and some of them are in danger of being cheated by others.

試題分析：這是一篇以表格的作文，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。注意表格的內(nèi)容，對(duì)于才藝表演有不同的看法，先說(shuō)別人的觀點(diǎn)，然后再闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】因?yàn)轭}目要求用五句話表達(dá)，所以范文長(zhǎng)句居多： At present an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in all kinds of TV talent shows, about which students’ opinions are divided. 這句話用 定語(yǔ)從句，Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art, contributing to their social experience and build up their confidence. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， other students hold the different opinion / view that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing somethng original and that they don’t have their own style. 這句話用了同位語(yǔ)從句， some are too lost in pursuing stars to concentrate on their studies and some of them are in danger of being cheated by others.這句話用了too…to…結(jié)構(gòu)。What’s more, However, Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。還有范文還使用了詞組：taking part in參加， concentrate on 專注于，in danger of有…危險(xiǎn)。