Question

4．請根據(jù)以下寫作要點用英語寫一篇作文：
1．簡要說明好的學習習慣有哪些及其重要性；
2．提出你的建議．
注意：
1．題目自擬；
2．詞數(shù)100左右；
3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
參考詞匯：
培養(yǎng)  cultivate．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)以下寫作要點用英語寫一篇作文，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：簡要說明好的學習習慣有哪些及其重要性；提出你的建議 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be up to sb由…來決定；First and foremost，首先；What's more，而且；Moreover而且；from now on從現(xiàn)在開始；
 One of the strongest forces in the world is habit，but whether to be an owner or a slave of habit is up to you．（高分句型一）
 First and foremost，students should concentrate their attention on what teachers say in class，and grasp key and difficult knowledge so that they will have classes effectively．（高分句型二）
Moreover，it is a necessity for the students to do their homework independently just to test how much they have learned．（高分句型三）

解答 One of the strongest forces in the world is habit，but whether to be an owner or a slave of habit is up to you．（高分句型一）As high school students，it is important to form good study habits．
     First and foremost，students should concentrate their attention on what teachers say in class，and grasp key and difficult knowledge so that they will have classes effectively．（高分句型二）What's more，the best students are those who are willing to ask questions and those who are creative．Moreover，it is a necessity for the students to do their homework independently just to test how much they have learned．（高分句型三）
     To cultivate good habits，students should start from now on and every little thing．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．