Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(/\)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起)不計(jì)分。

Manager,

I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.

First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.

As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider about these problems and make some improvement.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 well改為 good

 problem改為problems

 much改為 many

 annoyed改為annoying

 too改為so

 bear∧it

 signs改為sign

 terribly 改為terrible

 will 改為would

 a改為the

【解析】

試題分析： well改為 good ，good為形容詞，well為副詞，形容詞修飾名詞

 problem改為problems，前文中有some修飾可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式

 much改為 many，advertisements為可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式用

many修飾即可

 annoyed改為annoying，It指代廣告， annoying令人惱怒的，一般物作為主語，annoyed感到惱怒的，一般人作為主語

 too改為so ，句意：聲音是如此的大以至于我根本忍受不了，so …that 如此以至于，固定句型

 bear∧it，bear容忍，為及物動(dòng)詞后接賓語，故加it

 signs改為sign，句意:出口的標(biāo)記不能夠被清晰的看見。

 terribly 改為terrible，用形容詞修飾不定代詞

 will 改為would，整個(gè)文章講述了是過去的事情，故用過去將來時(shí)

 a改為the，特指這封信

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯語法掌握情況。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題考查了代詞用法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、形容詞，副詞等，平時(shí)多積累，答題時(shí)結(jié)合句意和語法進(jìn)行分析，答完后通讀，是否通順，符合邏輯即可。