【題目】假定你是李華，正與你校英國交換生Eric一起參加“規(guī)范英文標識(Identifying and Correcting Mistranslations)”系列志愿活動，請你寫一封郵件，告知他下一次活動安排。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 活動時間、地點；

2. 活動內(nèi)容；

3. 相關(guān)準備。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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【答案】Possible version 1

Dear Eric,

We intend to continue with the Project of Identifying and Correcting Mistranslations as planned. I’m writing to tell you about the coming activity.

Having edited the mistranslations collected, we are expected to sort them out. It involves analyzing reasons for the mistakes and getting ready for the presentation. Scheduled from 8:00 am to 11:00 am, the volunteering will be carried out at our school library. Please do remember to bring your laptop so that we can make a PPT, which will help clearly present the outcome.

Contact me if you have any questions.

Li Hua

Possible version 2

Dear Eric,

Shall we move on with our project this Saturday? We are going to work together to sort out various mistranslations based on the information we collected during our previous volunteering trips. And then we’ll discuss and correct them before we make a file on the computer.

If it’s convenient for you, shall we meet at the school library at 8 a.m. Don’t forget to the your U disk with the photos you’ve taken. I’ll carry my laptop and dictionary to help us make precise translations.

See you soon!

Lihua

Possible version 3

Dear Eric,

How is everything going?

Let’s continue our Identifying and Correcting Mistranslations Project this Saturday, shall we? How about going to Weihai Coastal Park this time? We’ll walk along the greenways and go around the park to check every possible tourist sign. As usual, you take pictures and I record the information, so get your camera ready. Besides, you’d better take a hat to avoid getting sunburnt.

Shall we meet at 7:45 a.m. at the main entrance of the park if it’s convenient for you?

Lihua

Possible version 4

Dear Eric,

I'm still rippingmad even though one week has passed since we presented our findings of the Identifying and Correcting Mistranslations Project.I can’t wait to go even further.

Shall we meet in the English Club at 2 p.m. this Sunday? We’ll go on discussing about the report to be delivered to the government for a more international city. So do remember to get your outline ready. And what do you think of the idea to enclose a brochure? Think it over and I’d like to get your view.

Li Hua

【解析】

本文為一篇應(yīng)用文，是向Eric告知規(guī)范英語標識的活動安排。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法�？偡址ㄖ赴阎黝}句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

寫作要求：1. 活動時間、地點；

2. 活動內(nèi)容；

3. 相關(guān)準備。

第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）

coming; edit; expect; involve; schedule; clearly

第三步：連詞成句

I’m writing to tell you about the coming activity.

Having edited the mistranslations collected, we are expected to sort them out.

It involves analyzing reasons for the mistakes and getting ready for the presentation.

Scheduled from 8:00 am to 11:00 am, the volunteering will be carried out at our school library.

Please do remember to bring your laptop so that we can make a PPT, which will help clearly present the outcome.

在進行造句的時候一定要注意時態(tài)和語態(tài)上面的問題.

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1. 文章的結(jié)構(gòu)順序：活動時間、地點；活動內(nèi)容；相關(guān)準備。

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：and; so that

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰

第五步：修改潤色

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